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Some people believe that in the near future there will be no borders between countries, while others feel that national borders will always remain. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

While others argue that border separation will be diminished in the next generation, some still believe it will stay the same. Although there are compelling arguments for the second view, I still believe that the former one makes more sense, with that I will give my opinion to support.
On the one hand, even though, national interest is considered to be essential but executions are made by the government. In the first place, building a separation between different countries was suggested by the one in power so as to stop the import of cheap products which would affect the economy of that country in the future. Moreover, drugs could be snug easily from one and another country as can be seen from the case of national drug abuse in America 1980s period. All in all, not only does the borders will not change but might also be enhance.
On the other hand, racism is one of the rationales that creates the borders, however, owing to the advance in technology, humans have been able to acquire a more extended knowledge about their surroundings and the diversity of cultures resulted in the decrease in racism. Additionally, there had been protests for African Americans’ rights. Having to the symbol of discrimination, the borders may soon be destroyed in order to establish another symbol-the symbol of peace.
In conclusion, power contributes greatly to the building of the borders creating a bad symbol relating to racism. Despite that, the future might change for the better. In my opinion, society norms are shifting significantly making acknowledging and changing inevitably so we should try our best to adapt to the good and criticize the bad.