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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of travelers visiting four different destinations in Thailand, namely Bangkok Zoo, Sea World, Wax museum, China town, from 2014 to 2017.

Overall, Bangkok Zoo, Sea World, and Chinatown experienced downwards trend while Wax museum showed an upward trend throughout the period. It is also apparent that China Town was recorded as the most preferred site in 2016.

The proportion of visitors to Wax museum started at just nearly 50% in the initial year. The figure then rose slightly to 80% in 2016, prior to a tedious fall of about 5% a year later.

On the contrary, Bangkok Zoo witnessed a mild fluctuation over the period given, with the respective figure hovering moderately during the first three years and sinking to a low of approximately 10% in 2017. In terms of people going to Sea World, the rate was exactly 70%, being higher than the other tourist attractions initially. Then, it reduced to just under 60% in the next two years before hitting a low point of 20% in the final year. As regards China town, despite being the least favored place in 2014, which accounted for only 20% in the percentage of holidaymakers, the figure afterward reached a peak of 100% in the subsequent 2 years. However, it then dramatically decreased to marginally over 10% at the end of the period.