Please Check My Ielts Writing Task 1

Topic:

The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)

Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.

You should write at least 150 words.

Essay:

The bar chart demonstrates how many hours each women and men in various categories do the household chores every week.

Overall, it is clear that married women with or without children spend more hours doing unpaid work than men do. In addition, married women with 3 or more children work harder than the other married women.

It can be seen from the chart that married women who have to take care for 3 or more children work for the longest hours, for about 60 hours, followed by above 50 hours are done by married women with 1 to 2 children. The figure for married women with no children is the lowest, at about 30 hours.

Married men who had no and 1 to 2 children share the equal number of hours doing household chores( for approximately 20 hours). Unlike women, married men with 3 or more children spend less time on household duty compared to the other men.