Please check my ielts task 2 . The subject is about globalisation

Globalisation is definitely an alarming debate in recent times. Many people acknowledged that the difference between countries is now faded, some people believe culture assimilation brings negative effects. From my perspective, the disadvantage of losing cultures does not outweigh the benefits one.

First, disadvantages of globalizing are also considerable and the main negative effect is the loss of national identity. Our disdintive features such as language, beliefs anf customs will be died out and people soon forget their own values. For instance, Vietnamese juveniles are affected by Kpop star then they indulge with Korean style of fashion and get used to foreign music instead of traditional music. Traditional things will be soon disappeared eternally as no one can inherit that.But for me , it is one of risk we have to exchange for the enhancement of technology .

In terms of advatages, there is no discrimination between people about hobbies or style. As we are all similar and have enormous things to interact and discuss and then people have a tendency to be open-minded and more socialble. Moreover, people are not so obsessed with luxuriuos brand , as a result,there will have less prejudices about the wealthy and poor. In addition, similarity helps consumers and producers at the same time in the market. Because companies can sell their commodities all over the world with free taxes and that lead to a competitive market with lower prices for consumers.

To conclude, it seems to me that the gain people got are more significant than what we lose from assimilation.