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Topic : Some people say that the increasing business and cultural contact between countries is a positive development, while others think that many countries will lose their national identities as a result.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

With the rapid development of modern technology becoming increasingly transparent, the connection between countries has become much easier. As a result, the contact between various aspects has been created especially business and culture which are fundamental to countries. It is followed by a debate that whether that contact is a positive impact or negative impact to countries. This essay will explain clearly about both advantages and disadvantages.

On one hand, the increasing contact in business and cultures definitely has good effects on nations. USA is the best example to explain this idea. USA is well known for the mixture of cultures all over the world which has been taken advantage to attract tourists all over the world. Thousands of travel agencies has been created to meet the demands of people.Therefore, the tourism has improved rapidly which contributes a large amount of income to the government.

On other hand, the agreement between cultures and business may have severe impacts on countries. Losing country’s identity is considered the worst vision if the government can not control it. For example, the traditional culture of Viet Nam has been gradually disappeared due to the mixture of various cultures from other countries. Our central government has made a lot of effort, brought in legislation to preserve the tradition so that it can’t disappear which keep making us different from others.

In short, everything has it own advantages and disadvantages. Therefore, to make full use of this contact, governments all over the world must try their best to not only preserve the unique of countries but also improve other aspects.