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The table shows the percentage of people from 3 age group (18-25 age group, 25-40 age group, and 40-65 age group) pursuing different career fields.
Overall, those aged 18-25 participated the most in the field of retail, while those in the 40-65 age group mostly pursue manufacturing careers. In addition, accountancy and law are the least popular fields among all 3 groups.
In detail, jobs related to retail were the most popular among those who aged 18-25, with 23% working in this field, while the percentage for the 2 other groups was only 12% in total. Also, the largest proportion of people in middle age worked in the field of manufacturing, with 23% in this category, compared to those aged younger, with 12% for those aged 18-25 and 15% for those aged 25-40. In addition, the 18-25 age group and the 25-40 age group showed a preference for other sections, with 21% and 18% working in such fields, whereas only 9% of those aged 40-65 participated in this section.
On the other hand, all there age groups are least interested in the fields of law and accountancy, with just around 3% of each group worked in these fields.
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" You cannot make those assumptions from the data. For example law and accountancy have the highest academic requirements to enter the profession. People also have to pass very difficult entrance exams.
- " You cannot make those assumptions from the data.
- For example law and accountancy have the highest academic requirements to enter the profession.
- People also have to pass very difficult entrance exams.
- Many people might prefer these careers, or are interested in them, but they might not be qualified to be employed there.
- Also, people may dislike retail jobs, but it is easy to get a job in that sector, especially around holiday season when the stores are crowded.
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You use words that show conclusions or inferences such as "popular," "preference" and "interest." You cannot make those assumptions from the data. For example law and accountancy have the highest academic requirements to enter the profession. People also have to pass very difficult entrance exams. Many people might prefer these careers, or are interested in them, but they might not be qualifie
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