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Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Introduction:
Money and leisure time are both crucial for people's lives. Some people believe that it is better to have more money and less free time while others think the opposite. I agree with the former view.

Ideas:
- Less money more free time:
+ Live a more simple life, have more time with family and friends.
+ Our choices of recreational activities are limited.
+ Have to worry about household expenses -> family might have conflicts about money issues.

- More money less free time:
+ We can afford to buy things we need, do our hobbies, have a luxurious life.
+ Having more money can help widen public relationship and gain respect from others.
+ Although less free time means we have little time to enjoy our lives and a busy life full of works can cause unhappiness and stress, we can solve this by changing our jobs or using money to hire more labours and divide the workloads to them if you are a manager.

Conclusion:
In conclusion, while it is essential to have money and free time, I believe having more money and less free time is better than having more free time but lesser money.