Please check my Ideas for Writing Task 2

Hello, have you seen my 2 previous posts? I haven't received any feedback (( If you see this post, I hope you will not bother checking it and the other ones as well!!!

Besides, I think my ideas for this task are really poor, hope you will help me find some good ones!

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Nowadays, young people communicate with friends and family mostly through
social networking sites, rather than other ways of communication like talking
on the phone or face to face.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Introduction: The Internet has allowed teenagers to keep in touch with their friends and family by using social networking sites. Due to this, they are using little to no other types of communication such as talking on the phone or face to face. In my opinion, this is definitely not a positive development.

Body 1:
Topic Sentence: To begin with, just communicating via social networking sites will decrease the oral communication skill of young people.
Support: They mostly just chat and show their thought by text messages and emoji. Therefore, they will have difficulty speaking and expressing their feelings when they have face to face meetings with others.
Example:
I have a friend who is a very talkative person on Facebook but in class he rarely talk with other classmates. As I am his close friend, he share to me that since he began using Facebook he finds it much more easier to communicate with others while speaking directly make him feel uncomfortable.

Body 2:
Topic Sentence: A further reason is that social networking sites make young people loose their social bonds.
Support:
This is because when talking with others in person or by phone you have stronger interaction with them. You will be able to hear their voice, see their facial expressions and thus, understand their feelings better.
On the contrary, just texting online will create a distance between young people and their families. They will find it rather unfamiliar when they meet their relatives after a long times and it will be quite embarrassing for them to talk.
Example: I live with my family in a different city so I only keep in touch with my relatives using Facebook. When my family visit them I find it quite awkward to talk directly in front of them.

Conclusion: In conclusion, I believe communicating online has negative impacts on young people and they should instead talking face to face and on the phone so that they can improve their speaking ability and maintain their relationship with others