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0 Carmen does a very good job 01del00in02del00 01font00by02font00 following the theater booking procedure01font00. S02font00he makes sure there is no conf01font00l02font00ict with any other02br
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00Carmen does a very good job gathering her videos in a timely manner. She makes sure the calendars are up to date at all times.0-

0Carmen does a very good job01font00 by02font00 gathering her videos in a timely manner. She makes sure the calendars are up to date 01del00at all times.02del00 01font00every time.02font0-

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00When Carmen come in for the morning she checks the room to make sure everything is in place. Any00 00material that need to be reserve or pick up she makes sure those things are done , she check all personal materials to make sure the processing00 00has been completed.Carmen does a very good job in following out her duties02br
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00When new media material comes in Carmen makes sure all items are process and file away.00 0-

0Carmen keeps these statistics up to date on a daily manner and she does a very good in doing it.02br
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0When Carmen has been ask to train the student she has done a very job, She does well in rechecking to make sure they understand everything. She 0-