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Jazzzy Posted 9 years ago
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Please check my grammatical errors .i write a inspirational story

I watched last movie in the month of march.name of this movie is "AIRLIFT" this is a real base story. so i am writing a story of this movie PLEASE CORRECT MY ERRORS.

Once a Indian origin man Ranjeet who lives in Kuwait . He was a top businessman in Kuwait.he has a good relations with billionaire businessman of Kuwait. he spends luxurious life in Kuwait. one day around 3:00 pm when he was sleeping suddenly one of his friend called him and Iranhas attacked upon Kuwait and government of Kuwait has flee away. he asked in a normal way it is not a once upon a time .it is not a once upon a time it keeps on happens in Kuwait. on the regular basis. situation gets worst day by day.one day Ranjeet decided he with his family will go to London. so he went Indian Embassy but on the way his driver has been killed by Iran's army.and when he reached Indian Embassy he did not get passport. while he was returning from Indian Embassy he has been caught by the Iran'scommander. and said you give me dollar then you can go out of Kuwait with your family. but Ranjeet thinks " I can go out of kuwait but what about my company's employee who have been working for me long time ago. so, how can I leave them alone . so he decided he will go out of Kuwaitnot only with his family but also all his staff.so he sets a camp for his employee .but in this camp along with his employee all Indian are come.he arranged food to his people in this critical days . then he went Iraq and talked a Iran government for for freedom of Indians. Iran government gave him his consolation and said we will send our ship "tipu sultan" from Kuwait to India.but due to some circumstances it has been stopped by the Iran 's government .on the other hand Ranjeet called Indian embassy.and Indian embassy said you have to come "Amman" all Indian come Amman and in the first time of the history this happen. India has lend 476 flights for picking up his people.

  

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Once a Indian origin man Ranjeet who lives in Kuwait . There are many problems here. First, it is not a sentence.

  • Once a Indian origin man Ranjeet who lives in Kuwait .
  • There are many problems here.
  • First, it is not a sentence.
  • Second, the space before the full stop (period) is incorrect.
  • Third, "a" is not used before a word beginning with a vowel sound.
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Once a Indian origin man Ranjeet who lives in Kuwait .

There are many problems here. First, it is not a sentence. Second, the space before the full stop (period) is incorrect. Third, "a" is not used before a word beginning with a vowel sound. Fourth, "once" indicates past tense, but your verb is present tense. Fifth, "Indian origin man Rajeet" is unnatural.

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