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Sorry to inform you that our factory is unable send the samples from China to Brazil directly by DHL. Due to a problem with their China customs handbook. Therefore, we will instruct them to send these samples to us, then dispatched by us on next Monday and expected to Brazil on Sept 10. Another 36pcs will send to your office on next Monday. The tracking number will be provide you later.

Wanwo · Accepted Answer

AnonymousSorry to inform you that our factory is unable send the samples from China to Brazil directly by DHL. Due to a problem with their China customs handbook. Therefore, we will instruct them to send these samples to us, then dispatched by us on next Monday and expected to Brazil on Sept 10. Another 36pcs will send to your office on next Monday. The tracking number will be provide you later.

I've corrected the grammar. It could be re-written to make it clearer but it's difficult to do without understanding more about what's going on.

Sorry to inform you that our factory is unable to send the samples from China to Brazil directly by DHL due to a problem with their China customs handbook. Therefore, we will instruct them to send these samples to us, then dispatched by us next Monday and expected to be in Brazil on Sept 10. We will send another 36pcs to your office next Monday. The tracking number will be provided to you later.

Feebs11 · Answer

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We regret to inform you that our factory is unable send the samples from China to Brazil directly by DHL. This is due to a problem with their China customs handbook. Therefore, we will instruct them to send these samples to us. We will forward them next Monday and you can expect them in Brazil on Sept 10. Another 36pcs will be sent to your office next Monday. The tracking number will be provided later.

Anonymous · Answer

Thanks for your help. Wanwo & Feebs11

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