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0Hello,everyone! Please help me correct my essay. The topic is about Matrix.02br
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00If possible, please give me some suggestions about how to write essays successfully.02br
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00I know that I have a lot to learn.02br
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00I really appreciate your kindness. Thanks a lot.02br
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00Q1: Blue or red pill, which one would you like to take?02br
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00Ans: I would take the red pill. I choose to be in the wonderland and figure out how deep the grave is. If I were Neo, being tired of the daily routine, I would like swallowing the red pill and letting my imagination run wild. I know that it is the path that I have never been there before, and it leads to another world that will eventually fantasize me.02br
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00Q2: Why can we accept the truth of the fantasy in the movie, while in reality we can hardly accept it?02br
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00Ans: We see the movies for entertainment. And before seeing the movie, we have hypothesis that everything in the movie can be fictitious, outlandish, and unrealistic. There is no monster will destroy our hometown, nor the alien will attack the earth. But if in reality, someone babbles about we’ll be killed by aliens, people will deprecate him of his foolish remarks. That is the reason, for it is too absurd to be true!02br
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00(a) When do Neo believe that he is the one?02br
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00(b) What’s the distinction between think and believing?02br
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00(a)00 00When being in jeopardy, Neo was shot dead but later awaken by some mysterious power- trinity’s kiss, somehow he saw Matrix as it really was and he freed his mind, he became powerful and beat the smith. After that event, he came to realize his responsibility. There is no way to escape it, it is his destiny.02br
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00(b)00 00By definition, believe00, is to have a particular mind set for a certain situation or hopeful outcome; 00Thinking00 involves the cereberal manipulation of information, as when we form concepts, engage in problems solving, reason and make decisions. In my opinion, if someone speaks to me:” I believe you’re right.” or” I think that you’re right.”00 The former has a strong confidence in me, while the latter has less. 02br
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00Q4. Why did the oracle hint Neo that he is not the one?02br
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00Ans: The oracle’s purpose is to want Neo to make a choice. Only by encountering some unexpected events can Neo believes in himself truly. Who is the one? The one must know some reason for his own existence. “With great power, comes great responsibility.”02br
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00Q5. In the beginning of the Matrix Reload, why comes the scene of home party?02br
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00Ans: Humans wanted to emancipate themselves from Matrix’s slavery. They did not deny there impulse, for it is the very thing that makes them human. The home party is a symbol that humans are the ones to take control of everything02br
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00(a)Why Smith constantly emphasized the meaning of purpose?02br
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00(b) Cause and effect? The choice?02br
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00Ans: What Smith meant is that purpose is the reason why bring us here. It is our fate to be here. We cannot dodge that we are the slaves to causality. That is cause and effect. And whether we can choose our fate or not? The effect does not necessarily affected by the cause, and we can make choice of it. 02br
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