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00Next day, we visited to the villagers’ house. Before we went to the home visitation we separated the people into five groups. My group with 4 peoples & One Leader’s & one guide (including me) When we reached the first home they made warmly welcome and we introduced ourselves & had started to talk with family. You know…….. Gospel out-line 00 02br
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00We followed outline of the gospel (background situation, their culture, background) and then I’d started to share gospel to the first woman (step by step) & talking with one by one.00 02br
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00While I was talking, the small girl (our guide) came to interrupt and showing the pagoda pictures and then a few minutes later another woman came here to speak the first woman. 02br
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00Suddenly I though that Satan’s doing something so I prayed in my mind Holy spirit came to here and to cover your wings, to protect us & show me your way…….I’m continuing to share again. Thanks GOD the message has been sent to the woman heart. 02br
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00The woman told me: she accepts it but she needs to have a think about it 02br
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00I said; another person is a girl. She’d got marriage and one child. I was sharing the good news and she listened carefully. I think she’d kept in touch with gospel messages. 02br
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00She said; when she has problem with her family, she’d tried to pray but she didn’t know how to pray just say words. She already read the some brochure, booklet & short message but she couldn’t understand all things some are confuse. Now I was telling & explain to her 02br
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00I know her, she’s walking around without hope. Instead of being filled with the word & with faith. She’s been stuffed full of religious tradition and superstition. She’s suffering.02br
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00We moved another house and I was sharing last person young boy & young girl. The young girl wants to be a Christian & to join our team membership. 02br
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00I don’t know how did she though?02br
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00Anyway......I’ve been sharing the good news and then I said; do you know How God love you so much? 02br
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00If you accept the salvation of God, you’ll be changing your amazing life.02br
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00Perhaps you know about Christ but have never trusted Him for salvation. God’s patient ………God’s waiting for you.02br
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00We needed God to send Jesus because of our sin. We were separates from Holy God.02br
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00He loved us so much that He gave His son. God the Father gave us the gift of Jesus the son. You trust Him...02br
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00Accept His gift today. It’s free 02br
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00No cost, no paid, Present from God02br
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00Thanks God; I shared your good news 4 person.02br
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00The first person showed the sign – yellow light02br
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00The second & last person – between yellow & green light 02br
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00But they needs follow up.02br
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00We will be doing a follow up (possibly)02br
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00thanks for your time!!!02br
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00mon myat0-