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Please check my grammar here. "I am the captain of my soul"
This is an essay I made about "I am the captain of my soul"
Please check my grammar and correct me if i'm wrong. You may chang the positioning of the sentences/
All humans have the privelage to choose what is right or what is wrong. We are also the one who will make our own decision, no matter what others will say we are still liable on our decision.
The line "I am the captain of my soul" means that we are the one who is in control of are doings and we are the one who will decide for ourselves.
Thanks!
Please check my grammar and correct me if i'm wrong. You may chang the positioning of the sentences/
All humans have the privelage to choose what is right or what is wrong. We are also the one who will make our own decision, no matter what others will say we are still liable on our decision.
The line "I am the captain of my soul" means that we are the one who is in control of are doings and we are the one who will decide for ourselves.
Thanks!
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please correct them and post a revised text here. All humans have the privelage t o choose what is right or what is wrong.
- I have underlined some problem areas.
- Please correct them and post a revised text here.
- All humans have the privelage t o choose what is right or what is wrong.
- We are also the one who will make our own decisi on, n o matter what others will say we are still liable on our decision.
- The line "I am the captain of my soul" means that we are the one who is in control of are doin gs an d we are the one who will decide for ourselves.
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please correct them and post a revised text here.
All humans have the privelage to choose what is right or what is wrong. We are also the one who will make our own decision, no matter what others will say we are still liable on our decision.
The line "I am the captain of my soul"
All humans have the privelage to choose what is right or what is wrong. We are also the one who will make our own decision, no matter what others will say we are still liable on our decision.
The line "I am the captain of my soul"
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