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Moongazer Posted 15 years ago
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Smoking cigarette is easy because it is very accesible . You can see people smoke at parks, on streets and you can buy just a piece of a cigarette for a low cost. Getting addicted is easier because it has chemicals that are addicting and if you make samoking as a habit you will get addicted to it. Quitting is the hardest because if you became addicted to smoking you will feel that if you don't smoke you can't live.

Before this seminar I already have no plan to smoke. I don't even like to taste it beceause I believe that any addiction starts with tasting. Because I already watched many shows that shows smoking is very bad, and i don't have any reason to smoke because I always think that smoking won't have any benefit for me and it will just waste my money,time and life.
  

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I have underlined some problems. Please correct them and post your revised text here. Smoking cigarette is easy because it is very accesible .

  • I have underlined some problems.
  • Please correct them and post your revised text here.
  • Smoking cigarette is easy because it is very accesible .
  • You can see people smoke at park s, o n stree ts an d you can buy jus t a piece of a cigarette for a low cost.
  • Getting addicted is easier because it has chemicals that are addicting and if you make samoking as a habit you will get addicted to it.
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I have underlined some problems. Please correct them and post your revised text here.

Smoking cigarette is easy because it is very accesible . You can see people smoke at parks, on streets and you can buy just a piece of a cigarette for a low cost. Getting addicted is easier because it has chemicals that are addicting

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