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Dgrlene Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please check my grammar and if need to correct the way I should say it.
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00 1.John works hard in pleasing the patron. He make’s sure the patron understand what our procedures and policies are. He is very knowledgeable of the units and makes proper referrals. 02 br
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00 2. When theater booking are call in John makes sure he following procedures to make the booking. If he does not have enough time to finish a booking he leaves notes so that the next staff member can follow thru. 02 br
00 3.If the staff person is not here to pull the videos for the following week John make sure the videos are pull. He also makes sure the calendars are posted for the following week. 02 br
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00 4.John does very well in ma king sure these duties has been done. Each week John will check the reserve materials to make sure all procedures have been done. 02 br
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00 5.John has done very well with the satellite material, he checks all paper work and notifies the patron that there material has arrival. John makes sure all of satellite material is sent back when the holding date has expired. 02 br
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00 6.When new material for Microforms come in John process the material and files it in a timely manner. 02 br
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00 7.John needs to make sure each month his microform statistics is collected and recorded on the spread sheet. 02 br
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00 8.John checks the guides and books he is doing a good job. John need to creative a notebook to keep up with his shelf reading. 02 br
00 9.John checks the c cabinet for slips. John need to creative a notebook to keep up with his shelf reading 00 . 02 br
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00 10.John does a very good job training his students. He lets them know he is available if they have any questions or concerns. 02 br
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00 11.John has a very good knowledge of the operations performed in the Media center. 02 br
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00 12.John is 00 00 very well organized. 02 br
00 13.John continues to communicated very well. 02 br
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00 14.John does well in letting his supervisor know if he not coming to work or running late. 02 br
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00 1.John works hard in pleasing the patron. He make’s sure the patron understand what our procedures and policies are. He is very knowledgeable of the units and makes proper referrals. 02 br
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00 2. When theater booking are call in John makes sure he following procedures to make the booking. If he does not have enough time to finish a booking he leaves notes so that the next staff member can follow thru. 02 br
00 3.If the staff person is not here to pull the videos for the following week John make sure the videos are pull. He also makes sure the calendars are posted for the following week. 02 br
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00 4.John does very well in ma king sure these duties has been done. Each week John will check the reserve materials to make sure all procedures have been done. 02 br
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00 5.John has done very well with the satellite material, he checks all paper work and notifies the patron that there material has arrival. John makes sure all of satellite material is sent back when the holding date has expired. 02 br
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00 6.When new material for Microforms come in John process the material and files it in a timely manner. 02 br
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00 7.John needs to make sure each month his microform statistics is collected and recorded on the spread sheet. 02 br
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00 8.John checks the guides and books he is doing a good job. John need to creative a notebook to keep up with his shelf reading. 02 br
00 9.John checks the c cabinet for slips. John need to creative a notebook to keep up with his shelf reading 00 . 02 br
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00 10.John does a very good job training his students. He lets them know he is available if they have any questions or concerns. 02 br
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0 Hello, I've corrected the first couple for you and marked these corrections in green. In the other sentences I have marked the errors in green for you to try to fix. The pink highlights show words that seem to be odd choices, or may be incorrect, but I cannot be sure without knowing the full context of this writing.
- 0 Hello, I've corrected the first couple for you and marked these corrections in green.
- In the other sentences I have marked the errors in green for you to try to fix.
- The pink highlights show words that seem to be odd choices, or may be incorrect, but I cannot be sure without knowing the full context of this writing.
- They don't seem the most natural choice to me.
- For example, by 'materials' do you mean videos, dvds etc?
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0 Hello, I've corrected the first couple for you and marked these corrections in green. In the other sentences I have marked the errors in green for you to try to fix. The pink highlights show words that seem to be odd choices, or may be incorrect, but I cannot be sure without knowing the full context of this writing. They don't seem the most natural choice to me. For example, by 'materials' do
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10 1.John works hard in pleasing the patron. He make’s sure the patron understand what our procedures and policies are. He is very knowledgeable of the units and makes proper referrals. 12 br
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10 2. When theater booking are call in John makes sure he following procedures to make t
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