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My friends said that I am a very caring person, because of this personality, my family think I am a controlling person. Some of my friends appreciate what I do to them, but sometimes one will get jealous because she thinks I have been forgetting about her, that I only think about my other friends.
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My friends said that I am a very caring person. Because of this personality, my family thinks I am a controlling person. Some of my friends appreciate what I do for them, but sometimes one will get jealous because she thinks I have been forgetting about her, that I think only about my other friends.
- My friends said that I am a very caring person.
- Because of this personality, my family thinks I am a controlling person.
- Some of my friends appreciate what I do for them, but sometimes one will get jealous because she thinks I have been forgetting about her, that I think only about my other friends.
- The sentences don't go together well as a paragraph.
- The sentence about your friend is a change of topic.
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My friends said that I am a very caring person. Because of this personality, my family thinks I am a controlling person. Some of my friends appreciate what I do for them, but sometimes one will get jealous because she thinks I have been forgetting about her, that I think only about my other friends.
The sentences don't go together well as a paragraph. The sentence about your friend is a
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