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Ztq3 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Please check my grammar

Please read the e-mail threads below regarding the March funds for XYZ. Also please read the attached e-mail for direct deposit form sent by ABC in January 2015. We just want to confirm that April funds will go to the right bank account. Thanks
  

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This is correct overall. I would suggest, however, a couple of changes to make it clearer: Please read the e-mail threads included below regarding the March funds for XYZ. Also please read the attached e-mail about the direct deposit form sent by ABC in January 2015.

— Doctor D

  • This is correct overall.
  • I would suggest, however, a couple of changes to make it clearer: Please read the e-mail threads included below regarding the March funds for XYZ.
  • Also please read the attached e-mail about the direct deposit form sent by ABC in January 2015.
  • We just want to confirm that the April funds will be deposited in the correct go to the right bank account.
  • Thank you.
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This is correct overall. I would suggest, however, a couple of changes to make it clearer:

Please read the e-mail threads included below regarding the March funds for XYZ. Also please read the attached e-mail about the direct deposit form sent by ABC in January 2015. We just want to confirm that the April funds will be deposited in the correct go t
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Thank you Doctor D
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