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Khm1710 Posted 13 years ago
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Please check my grammar
My english report in college.
First we look into perspective of 'women's education'. Because CPS students are Younger generation, they regard women receiving higher education as positive. They think opportunity of education is given equally to men and women regardless of gender. Also girl students prefer higher education because of better treatment in workplaces through increasing their working ability, so they consider women's education is very important.
However our grandparents who are relatively old had different view as compared with younger generation. They think women's education is unnecessary. In there view they think earning money is man's job, do house work is woman's duty. And in fact women's education contribute to late marriage and low birthrate, elder people worried about that.
First we look into perspective of 'women's education'. Because CPS students are Younger generation, they regard women receiving higher education as positive. They think opportunity of education is given equally to men and women regardless of gender. Also girl students prefer higher education because of better treatment in workplaces through increasing their working ability, so they consider women's education is very important.
However our grandparents who are relatively old had different view as compared with younger generation. They think women's education is unnecessary. In there view they think earning money is man's job, do house work is woman's duty. And in fact women's education contribute to late marriage and low birthrate, elder people worried about that.
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Don't forget commas, grammar, articles, spelling, and style! For example... However , our grandparents , who are relatively old , ha ve a different view as compared with to the younger generation.
- Don't forget commas, grammar, articles, spelling, and style!
- For example...
- However , our grandparents , who are relatively old , ha ve a different view as compared with to the younger generation.
- They think women's education is unnecessary.
- In there According to their view , they think earning money is the man's job, and do ing house work housework is the woman's duty.
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