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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Need help editing the following ten sentences
1. Persuasion requires learning about you're audience, and analysing why they might resist your goal.
2. An especialy effective arguement includes 2 indespensable elements; a reasonable request, and a well presented line of reasoning.
3. If you're goal is to persuade a lending institution to give you fifty thoughsand dollars you would probably use rational appeal.
4. Our Presenitdent and Senior Sales Manager decided to send a sales letter to all current customers therefore they analyzed the product, purpose and audience.
5. There sales eletter focuses on the following 4 parts (1) gaming the audience attention (2) Convincing them that the purpose is worthy (3) Overcoming resistence and (4) Motivating action.
6. Experts agree that one of the biggest mistakes in persuasive request's are the failure to anticipate, and off set audience resistence.
7. because the Manager and him builded interest with easy to read facts and figures they're letter will undoubtably suceed.
8. A claim letter is a form of complaint consequently its wise to use the indirect strategy.
9. Anger and emotion is not effective in persuasion but many writers can no controll there temper.
10. Our latest press release which was written in our corporate communication department annouces the opening of 3 canadian office.
1. Persuasion requires learning about you're audience, and analysing why they might resist your goal.
2. An especialy effective arguement includes 2 indespensable elements; a reasonable request, and a well presented line of reasoning.
3. If you're goal is to persuade a lending institution to give you fifty thoughsand dollars you would probably use rational appeal.
4. Our Presenitdent and Senior Sales Manager decided to send a sales letter to all current customers therefore they analyzed the product, purpose and audience.
5. There sales eletter focuses on the following 4 parts (1) gaming the audience attention (2) Convincing them that the purpose is worthy (3) Overcoming resistence and (4) Motivating action.
6. Experts agree that one of the biggest mistakes in persuasive request's are the failure to anticipate, and off set audience resistence.
7. because the Manager and him builded interest with easy to read facts and figures they're letter will undoubtably suceed.
8. A claim letter is a form of complaint consequently its wise to use the indirect strategy.
9. Anger and emotion is not effective in persuasion but many writers can no controll there temper.
10. Our latest press release which was written in our corporate communication department annouces the opening of 3 canadian office.
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This looks like a set of homework quesitons.
The purpose of this site is to help you learn, not to do your work for you so that you don't have to learn.
The purpose of those homework questions is to find out what you still need to learn, so you can learn it.
Answering these questions for you would run contrary to the whole purpose of learning, and of this site.
It is not rewarding
The purpose of this site is to help you learn, not to do your work for you so that you don't have to learn.
The purpose of those homework questions is to find out what you still need to learn, so you can learn it.
Answering these questions for you would run contrary to the whole purpose of learning, and of this site.
It is not rewarding
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Hello Clive,
I have completed corrections on the ten posted grammatically wrong sentences and would like for someone to post their work so that I can compare my work.
Thank You.
I have completed corrections on the ten posted grammatically wrong sentences and would like for someone to post their work so that I can compare my work.
Thank You.
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