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CoSmO_hk Posted 19 years ago
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00 Nowadays, most family has at least one computer which is very convenient to me to know lots of information. At present, the computer is so common that many people would like learning with computer instead of books gradually.02br
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00 00First of all, whenever you can staying at home to know all information using through internet and it does not spend any your money. Moreover, you can make a foreigner with friend that it can help you know more foreign culture and practice you speaking other language. Furthermore, you can search English movie easily and listen to foreign radio which is free. It can improve your listening and speaking ability. Learning with books can’t be found these advantages. 02br
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00 00Learning with the computer is many good advantages. Nevertheless, it also is some disadvantages. While you feel bored using the computer, you probably will play game to relax yourself that must waste you a lot of times, but learning with books which can make you much concentrate on learning because you can’t do any play in your books. Still further, learning with books does not reduce your vision, but using computer must be reduces your vision quickly. Last but not least, learning with books should make you be interested in reading. whenever you can read even you get on and wait for a bus.02br
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00 00Although learning with the computer is very good, even it better than learning with books, in my views point, I would like learning with books because I feel it studying more comfortable and faster than00 learning with computer.0-
  

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0 Nowadays, most01b 00 families have02b 00 at least one computer01b 00,02b 00 which is very convenient 01b 00for finding lots02b 00 of information. 02b 02br 00 First of all, whenever you can 01b 00stay02b 00 at home 01b 00and find information02b 00 using 01b 00the02b 00 internet , 01b 00you do not02b 00 spend any 01b 00of 02b 00your money. Moreover, you can 01b 00make friends with02b 00 a foreigner, 01b 00which02b 00 can help you01b 00 learn02b 00 more01b 00 about02b 00 foreign culture and 01b 00practice speaking02b 00 other 01b 00languages02b 00.

  • 0 Nowadays, most01b 00 families have02b 00 at least one computer01b 00,02b 00 which is very convenient 01b 00for finding lots02b 00 of information.
  • 02b 02br 00 First of all, whenever you can 01b 00stay02b 00 at home 01b 00and find information02b 00 using 01b 00the02b 00 internet , 01b 00you do not02b 00 spend any 01b 00of 02b 00your money.
  • Moreover, you can 01b 00make friends with02b 00 a foreigner, 01b 00which02b 00 can help you01b 00 learn02b 00 more01b 00 about02b 00 foreign culture and 01b 00practice speaking02b 00 other 01b 00languages02b 00.
  • Furthermore, you can search 01b 00for02b 00 English 01b 00movies02b 00 easily and listen to 01b 00free02b 00 foreign radio.
  • It can improve your listening and speaking 01b 00abilities02b 00.
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