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Mountain Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

please check my grammar

Hi Jenny,

The only people I know with minivan are you, Mike, and Alan. If you know someone else that has one let me know, otherwise, we'll need your assistant. Besides, it's more fun if you'd go with us and shopping is women specialty.

Please modify to make it sounds better if you could. Thanks in advance.
  

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Hi Jenny, The only people I know with a minivan are you, Mike, and Alan. If you know someone else that has one let me know, otherwise, we'll need your assistance. Besides, it will be more fun if you go with us and shopping is a woman 'thing'.

  • Hi Jenny, The only people I know with a minivan are you, Mike, and Alan.
  • If you know someone else that has one let me know, otherwise, we'll need your assistance.
  • Besides, it will be more fun if you go with us and shopping is a woman 'thing'.
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Hi Jenny,

The only people I know with a minivan are you, Mike, and Alan. If you know someone else that has one let me know, otherwise, we'll need your assistance. Besides, it will be more fun if you go with us and shopping is a woman 'thing'.
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I'd also put a comma between "one" and "let".
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In my opinion, after [please let me know] there should be a period and [Otherwise] should be a new sentence.

The only people I know with minivan are you, Mike, and Alan. If you know anyone else who has one,(comma) please let me know.(period)
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Is there a rule when use "assistant" and "assistance" ? Thank you
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Hi,

Is there a rule when use "assistant" and "assistance" ?

assistant is an adjective. eg He's an assistant clerk. It's also a noun, for a person.. eg Please discuss this with my assistant.

assistance is an abstract noun. eg Thank you for your assistance, thank you for
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