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Akm2446 Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

Please check my formal letter (grammar)

Topic : You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:
  • Introduce yourself
  • Explain what sort of job you would like
  • Say what experience and skills you have

Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing this letter to apply for a part-time job. My name is John Smith and I am thirty two years old. Currently, I live in London and I am studying computer software engineering in university. I would like to do a part-time job during my studying for two years.

I am attending university courses all weekdays between 8 am and 2 pm. So, I have free times at evening. I prefer to get a part-time job in computer software programming field or other relevant fields.

I have five years experience in computer software programming and I did many software projects for various companies. I am familiar with new software tools and technologies and I am able to adopt myself for team working.

If you find a suitable job for me, please call me by phone, using the number +66 444 887257 or email me at :

xxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

Yours Faithfully,

John Smith.
  

Top answer

I would like to have (I think this sounds fine here) a part-time job. (It is preferable to your name down) I am thirty two years old. Currently, I am living in London and studying computer software engineering in a university.

  • I would like to have (I think this sounds fine here) a part-time job.
  • (It is preferable to your name down) I am thirty two years old.
  • Currently, I am living in London and studying computer software engineering in a university.
  • I would like to engage myself with a part-time job during the two-year period of my study .
  • I am attending university courses between 8 am and 2 pm on all week days .
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I would like to have (I think this sounds fine here) a part-time job. (It is preferable to your name down) I am thirty two years old. Currently, I am living in London and studying computer software engineering in a university. I would like
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Thanks vsuresh for your help.

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