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Adia Khan Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Please check my expension

there are two tragedies in life,one is get what desire, whereas other is not to get the desire.
The thought which is being discuss, is loaded with sagacity and wisdom. It is taken from Bernard Shaw's writing.this is absolutely true, that when one get his desire,what he wanted to get.Thereafter he tries to maintain his success.But if one is not succeed to full his wants then he engulfed in agony and miseries.Many people in this world run after to their desire despite the fact that they have much else to achieve.
Being an successful though is very delighting moments. But in a world no body can achieve every thing.
As there is example of Macbeth how he get the throne on the anticipation of which es. And after that how had to made efforts to intact to his throne,however he didn't succeed to prevent his throne. Though didn't want to do wrong things but he had to. Eventually at the end he kill himself.
This was aftermath of his desires. so, one should have to kept himself away from such type of miseries by avoiding too much wishes.
  

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Hi Adia: Expension is not a good word. Do you mean paragraph ? I have highlighted some errors and fixed some others in bold.

  • Hi Adia: Expension is not a good word.
  • Do you mean paragraph ?
  • I have highlighted some errors and fixed some others in bold.
  • Make sure that there is a space after a full stop and other punctuation marks.
  • t here are two tragedies in life , (incorrect punctuation) one is to get what one desire s , whereas the other is not to get what one desires.
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Hi Adia:

Expension is not a good word. Do you mean paragraph? I have highlighted some errors and fixed some others in bold.
Make sure that there is a space after a full stop and other punctuation marks.

there are two tragedies in life, (incorrect punctuation) on
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Thanks allot to highlight my mistakes Emotion: heart. I'll try to improve my these flaws on my next piece of writing.I also want to ask you cou
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Adia KhanI also want to ask you could i share with you my short essays, precise of writings and expansions at here.
Yes, of course. Usually someone will help.
If you have questions about why something was marked as incorrect, just post a reply in the same thread.
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i want ask you, that, what is the meaning of legal at this forum. I post my piece over there, but i don't know what it implies please, guide me .
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The "Legal English" section deals with questions about the use of English in laws, legal documents, and by lawyers.
I moved your essay to the "Essay, Report and Composition Writing" section, because that seemed to be the appropriate place for it.
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thanks for yours assistance.

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