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• Topic: Write a paragraph (approximately 100 -150 words) about the benefits of knowing a foreign language.

It is a fact that knowing a foreign language has a lot of benefits. This paragraph will examine the advantages of this problem and provide a logical conclusion. First, knowing a foreign language makes traveling easier and more comfortable. When you travel to other countries, you can’t communicate with a local person in your mother language. You must say English or their language. For example, when I go to England, I must speak English, not other languages. Second, another reason is that it would help to have an opportunity to have a job. Nowadays, lots of companies issue an order that you must know English or a foreign language to work at the company. For instance, if you want to work for Apple, you are obliged to speak English well. Finally, last but not least, it enriches your knowledge. There are a lot of interesting and useful books written in a foreign language at present. So you need to know this language to get knowledge from that book. For example, some books are written in English like Harry Potter, Tuesday with Morrie, Alice adventures in wonderland. As I have noted, there are a lot of benefits from knowing a foreign language such as traveling, having a job, and enriching your knowledge.