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Topic: Write a paragraph about this topic. “Using cell phones and computers have made communication among people much easier.” What is your point of view about it?

Some people say that using cell phones and computers has made communication much easier. I completely agree with this opinion. Nowadays, with the development of era 4.0s, more and more people use technology to communicate.

First, you don’t need to have too much time and be easy to communicate with. In the past, the only way to communicate with others was to write a letter and wait for two weeks to receive or meet face to face. It's quite time-consuming! But now, you just need a few minutes to keep in touch with someone only by the phone and computers with a lot of new scientific inventions such as Facebook, Zalo, Messenger. For example, if I want to ask about my friend, I just spend a minute messaging and calling on my phone.

Second, in the Covid-19 academic, using cell phones and computers instead of meeting face to face to in contact with others can distance from others, limit going out and make communication simpler. It also gets people to be not boring at home. For instance, if you feel bored in the days of social distancing at home, you can commune with somebody by using Facebook, Zalo, Messenger.

With all mentioned above, I am convinced that communication has been made us and our lives easier and easier by using cell phones and computers.