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• Topic: ‘It is better to study a subject that is interesting rather than something that is useful but boring’. Do you agree?

Some people think that studying an interesting subject is better than something that is useful but boring. I partially agree with this opinion.

First, studying their interesting subject brings many benefits for students. If they study our favorite subject, they will devote more time and energy to their studying. And also they will pay more attention to the lesson. So, their academic results will be better. For example, when students follow their passion, they will be motivated to keep learning and give their best and of course me too. If I can learn my favorite subject, I can have good grades and have more time to relax. In contrast, if students are forced to learn their uninteresting subject, they are quickly bored and stressed. So, they can drop out of school. For example, my brother doesn't like studying science so, after three months, he quit school.

On the other hand, if people learn useful subjects, people will have more job opportunities and higher salaries. For example, in Viet Nam, a candidate with a degree in technology will find it easier to have a job than a history major. Moreover, it plays an important part in the development of the country. For example, people who study some useful subjects such as technology, medicine will make great contributions to the country.

In conclusion, it is better to study an interesting subject than something useful but boring.