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• Topic: Write us a review of a good place for people your age to go on holiday?

The covid-19 epidemic has prevented people my age from going on holiday. I think after covid-19 you can go to Vietnam where I was born to visit Dalat which is one of the most famous cities in Viet Nam.

Dalat is located in the center of the VietNam southern highlands, about 300 km from the north of Ho Chi Minh City. You must go by plane to pay a visit here. Dalat is a city of fog so everything was covered in a thick layer of mist at a very early time in the morning. The climate here is warm during the day and quite cold in the evening down to 12 degrees C. Therefore, you must prepare some warm clothes. In general, the climate is relatively mild and suitable for available flora and fauna to grow.

Due to the climate, there are a lot of beautiful flowers here. This is the reason why Dalat is called "a flower city". You should visit Dalat City Flower Garden to see them. All of the teenagers like it here because they can take so many pretty photos. Moreover, in the evening, you can go to the Dalat night market. You have to go there since it’s one of the features of Dalat. Here you are able to eat some fried foods, drinks,... If you are interested in sightseeing you can visit the valley of love, Mong Mo hill, Tuyen Lam lake, Than Tho lake, Data waterfall,... The more we discover, the more beauty and excitement in Dalat we find. People my age like to go there because of the beauty and attraction of Dalat.

In conclusion, if you have the chance of coming to Vietnam, let’s visit the romantic city - Dalat.