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Nhu Hoai Posted 6 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please check my essay, thank you so much

Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

"People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing."


I absolutely agree with the statement that sometimes people should do things they do not enjoy doing.

Take me for example, I hate to get up early. It is so relaxing to wake up without the help of an alarm clock and to lie fifteen minutes more recalling your dreams. Nevertheless I get up at 6 o'clock every morning, put in my T-shirt and shorts and go jogging. Somtimes when I hear the sound of my alarm clock I have a strong wish to put my head under the pillow and fall asleep. Now and then I wake up at night and look at my wrist watch to check how many hours I have left. And I am the happiest person in the whole world because I have a few more hours to sleep. You may ask me "Why do I do it every morning?" Because more than I hate to get up early I love to feel freshness of the morning air. I love to feel a little bit tired and at the time to be so full of energy. It helps me to feel better all day long.

Morever, I hate shopping. It is my opinion that shopping takes too much tine which I can spend doing other things I enjoy doing. Nevertheless every week I go to the nearest supermarket because otherwise my refrigerator will be empty and I can not afford to have dinner at the restaurant every day. Besides I like to cook. So, a few hours spent on shopping makes me happy for the whole week. Is not it great? From my point of view when a man has to do things he does not like to he becomes stronger, more responsible and can enjoy life.

  

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I absolutely agree with the statement that sometimes people should do things they do not enjoy doing. (Your essay would be much better if you didn't copy the prompt verbatim. Make a paraphrase.

  • I absolutely agree with the statement that sometimes people should do things they do not enjoy doing.
  • (Your essay would be much better if you didn't copy the prompt verbatim.
  • Make a paraphrase.
  • ) Take me for example, I hate to get up early.
  • It is so relaxing to wake up without the help of an alarm clock and to lie there fifteen minutes more recalling my your dreams.
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I absolutely agree with the statement that sometimes people should do things they do not enjoy doing. (Your essay would be much better if you didn't copy the prompt verbatim. Make a paraphrase. I believe it is beneficial for people to occasionally force themselves to engage in activities they dislike.)

Take me for example, I hate to get up early. It is so relaxing to wake

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