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The given chart provides information regarding the social and economic factors for four nations in 1994
from United Nation statistics. It was evident that Japan contributed to all exceedingly high indicators
apart from daily calorie, as opposed to the insignificance of Zaire.
To commence, in terms of annual income per person, Japan, which amounted to $15,760 at that
figure, was superior to that of the others, with Canada following at $11,100, while Peru and Zaire
insignificantly ranged from $130 to $160. In the meantime, there was a negligible discrepancy of 2 years
between Japan and Canada when it comes to life expectancy, with 78 and 76 respectively, whereas
Zaire’s life span was inferior to that of Peru. Correspondingly, Peru was still higher at 1927 than Zaire as
for the daily calories supply per person, but a reversed trend was seen that the number of Canada
surpassed Japan and reached 3326, compared with 2846 of the latter. Relating to adult literacy rate,
Japan and Canada highly resembled at 99%, and Peru went behind at 68%, outnumbering Zaire of only
34%.
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