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Linh phan Posted 9 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please check my essay task 2, please!

Topic: Every day, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problem?

It is widely argued that the amount of food have been wasted with a large in every country over the world. There are a number of reasons behind this phenomenon and several solutions should be adopted to solve the problem.

There are two primary why people wasted a lot of food. Firstly, more food have been manufactured than residents buy them. Several food and beverage firms produce more than enough food for every man, woman and child to eat daily, while other poverty have a serious deficit in food supply who really need it the most. Secondly, people often buy more food than they can eat. In fact, living standard witnessed the dramatic increment, so that people are willing to cover all expenses for beverage and food even which they do not really need. Besides, many family also cook too much dishes for some special events such as New Year party, birthday party, etc, but other members can not eat it all. In addition, there are numerous residents throw away food too soon while date the food could be eaten by.

Since such issues are serious, the government and individuals should take steps immediately to address these problems. The first solution is that government enhance food awareness, particular about food wastage. This could be launched by some social campaign which aim to raise up the actions to safe food and beverage or share food for ending global hunger purpose, for example, “Share Food. Share Life” which will be a campaign for a future where no one should go hungry. On an individual level, every retailer of owner of restaurants should issue regulations for customers. If customers left any food after a meal, they would pay a fine.

In conclusion, food wastage is becoming more common and this problem need to be tackle not only by the government but also by individuals.

  

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The essay is well organized. You make some good points. But you have made many grammatical errors.

  • The essay is well organized.
  • You make some good points.
  • But you have made many grammatical errors.
  • The text with mistakes is highlighted in yellow.
  • When you have an adjective, like large or primary , it must be followed by a noun.
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The essay is well organized. You make some good points. But you have made many grammatical errors. The text with mistakes is highlighted in yellow.

When you have an adjective, like large or primary, it must be followed by a noun.


It is widely argued that the amount of food have (subject/verb disagreement) b

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