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NANANIK Posted 15 years ago
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PLEASE CHECK MY ESSAY AND TELL ME ABOUT MISTAKES!^^
It's well known that, computer has a great influence on our life in whole. Everything has changed that's why a process of interaction of teachers and students has changed too.
??In fact, using the high quality technology machines help professors to educate us more effective. Educators can aid pupils which missed the classes and post the important information on the private pages.
Unfortunately, some of rude students try to put down their mentors by using private information, and teachers are forced to protect it.
??In conclusion, I want to add that educators and students should be very careful. Finding right balance between minimal risks and maximum efficiency is the best way to our success.
??In fact, using the high quality technology machines help professors to educate us more effective. Educators can aid pupils which missed the classes and post the important information on the private pages.
Unfortunately, some of rude students try to put down their mentors by using private information, and teachers are forced to protect it.
??In conclusion, I want to add that educators and students should be very careful. Finding right balance between minimal risks and maximum efficiency is the best way to our success.
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I am not good at English either, but this is what I think it should be... It is well known that computers have a significant influence on our life as a whole. Everything has changed, that is why the process of interaction between teachers and students has altered.
- I am not good at English either, but this is what I think it should be...
- It is well known that computers have a significant influence on our life as a whole.
- Everything has changed, that is why the process of interaction between teachers and students has altered.
- In fact, using this technology has helped professors to educate us more effectively.
- Educators can now aid pupils who missed class by posting the important information on their private pages.
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I am not good at English either, but this is what I think it should be...
It is well known that computers have a significant influence on our life as a whole. Everything has changed, that is why the process of interaction between teachers and students has altered.
??In fact, using this technology has helped professors to educate us more effectively. Educators can now aid pupils
It is well known that computers have a significant influence on our life as a whole. Everything has changed, that is why the process of interaction between teachers and students has altered.
??In fact, using this technology has helped professors to educate us more effectively. Educators can now aid pupils
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