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Topic In the modern world, people are no longer necessary to use food from animals or product from animals such as medicine and clothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true for many people that with the development of advanced technology, food and items made from animals should no longer be consumed. In my own point of view, I completely support this idea eventhough it might bring about some potential drawbacks for human.

To begin with, there are some reasons why banning the use of animal-based products can have negative effects on human life. First of all, as numerous substances in animal’s body can not be produced artificially. For example, vitamin A is only existed in fish’s eyes. Therefore, human can not create this element by themselves. Additionally, meat products are usually rich in protein and can be very nutritious, this can have a range of advantages for human such as improving their health state, slowing down the process of senescence process. If people do not consume food from fauna, they might lack of several crucial substances and more prone to contract various potential health problems.

In spite of these advantages of using food or products made from animals, I would argue that it should be banned permanently. Firstly, since products and food from animals are being overused, a great number of species such as salmon and tortoises are facing the vedge of extinction. As a result, food chains are negatively affected. On top of that, thank to the help of innovative technology, human now can make new nutritious elements. These products are usually far cheaper than the original ones.

In conclusion, although using food and products made from fauna might be beneficial to some extent, I believe that it has more drawbacks to human in the long run.