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Some people say that teachers will not be necessary in the future and will be replaced by robots others say that teachers will be irreplaceable. Discuss two view points and give opinions.

As we sail through the 21st century, technology in the classroom is becoming more and more predominant. While some people think that the teaching job will be handled by robots, others claim that the importance of teachers will remain unchanged. Both sides will be discussed within the scope of this essay.

Advocates of robots teachers state that robots have the ability to provide students with accurate and up-to-dated information relevant to the lessons. To illustrate, such kind of machines is programmed to have a tremendous memory source covering almost every subject matter such as Maths, Physics and history. Therefore, students are likely to get satisfactory answers based on long-term research and constantly refreshed information to any questions within minutes.. Besides, robots teachers may be supported on the grounds of economic benefits. Although the idea of putting robot teaching into operation can be bewildering due to the initial cost, it is proved to be a long-term investment. Specifically, as one single robot is capable of teaching various subjects and require no salary, it can be cost-effective compared to the expense of paying a large number of teachers each month.

On the other hand, I am in favor of the assumption that human teachers will remain fundamental in the future. In the first place, learning efficiency in classes is one of the reasons why human teachers are indispensable. To demonstrate, teachers not only cater for Academic knowledge but also pay attention to every student, whether they concentrate and the teaching methods suit them. In the event that some students have difficulty understanding the lecture, teachers may give them encouragement as well as flexibility and range letters for students of diversion to levels. What is more a wealth of moral lessons at acquired by students with the help of teachers. As a matter of fact, students especially the young ones, have a great respect for the teachers and consider them as a good pattern to follow also teachers teach pupils to be disciplined by telling them to be punctual, paying attention in class

In conclusion it is undeniable that Robert and Huy?n teachers have their own positive points however I hold a firm belief that at no time can teachers be replaced by modern technology.