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Topic: Task 2: It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaur, dodo…) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is said that people do not have to suppress the process of animal extinction like dinosaur or dodo since it is considered as nature. For me, I strongly argue the toss.
At first, I believe that by protecting animals, students can see those species not only through pictures but also in real life. They can also observe and study about the animal's features or habitats or at first hand. Thereby, they understand thoroughly about those species. For examples, Oxford's university has pointed out that about 57% of students found it extremely interesting in watching the animal directly when they were taught about those species. Thus, it is very essential for people to prevent animals from the verge of extinction.
Secondly, animals play an important role in tourism. As we know, zoos and national parks can make a profit from rare animals. It is can not be denied that a lot of tourists are attracted by the animals. This can also lead to the development of the areas. For instance, according to the survey in 2007 of Vietnam, the Thu Le zoo welcomed over 60,000 tourists each year. This made Ha Noi become one of the wealthiest cities in this country. Therefore, it stands out that people have to intervene in the extinction of species.
To conclude, I oppose the idea that people do not need to prevent the extinction of animals as those species help us not only with education but also with tourism.
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g. dinosaur, dodo…) In my opinion, this statement is false. The non-avian dinosaurs, along with three-quarters of the extant species on earth, terrestrial and marine, were all extinguished 66 million years ago with a small asteroid crashed into the earth and caused a disastrous climate change.
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- dinosaur, dodo…) In my opinion, this statement is false.
- The non-avian dinosaurs, along with three-quarters of the extant species on earth, terrestrial and marine, were all extinguished 66 million years ago with a small asteroid crashed into the earth and caused a disastrous climate change.
- There have been five mass extinctions in the past 500 million years.
- More recently, in the past 125 thousand years, all large animals, especially mammals, but also turtles and birds, were killed off by human hunters.
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Linh Linh 1953 It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaur, dodo…)
In my opinion, this statement is false.
The non-avian dinosaurs, along with three-quarters of the extant species on earth, terrestrial and marine, were all extinguished 66 million years ago with a small asteroid crashed into the earth and caused a disast
0It is said that (Please do not use these ugly dummy-it passive clauses. They add nothing to the essay. ) People do not have to suppress the process of animal extinction (I do not understand this. Is it a requirement, like a governmental regulation, that people must not have feelings o
0Topic: Task 2: It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaur, dodo…) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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