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3. Many people think technological devices such as smart phones, tablets and mobile phones bring more disadvantages than advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people think that technological devices such as smart phones, tablets and mobile phones bring more disadvantages than advantages but I disagree with that view without denying the existence of their disadvantages.

In fact, I believe that the main measurement of bringing advantages or disadvantages of those devices is based on persons' way of usage and the ability of managing that use. No one denies how those devices became a part of peoples' live. They are used a lot in education, occupations and communication. Underestimating the importance of them with such a claim is not going to help nor solve the original problem of misusage.

I see that when people organize their time effectively, and use their smart devices in learning new things, studying, improving necessary skills, and entertainment such as playing video games without exaggeration, it would bring a lot of advantages. On contrary, when people spend too much time on just playing games or chatting on social media, it would not bring them that amount of expected advantages. Moreover, it might affect their health negatively.

Therefore, instead of being against smart devices and underestimating their value, it is better to focus on the most common factors that make people think negatively of such technology and trying to give them solutions. For instance, the possible solution for spending too much time on using smart devices is by learning the strategic of time management to help people exploit their time positively and control it in a modest way.

In conclusion, technology is a part of people life. The advantages and disadvantages of it are all based on peoples' way of usage. We should not be against technology but rather raise awareness among people on society on how to get the most benefit of it and avoid negativity.

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