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Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often

argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of

committing a crime.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many recent years, we have a positive look for people who had been in prison and become good citizens later. In my opinion, I strongly agree that these are the best people talk to teenager about bad consequences of wrongdoing.

Firstly, old prisoners have experiences about commiting a crime. These used to be bad persons so they can understand deeply what action we should avoid. After going out prision and live better, they will know the exactly ways to be a good citizens.

Secondly, teenagers are sensitive ages so they maybe have more faith in advance’s old prisoners than their parents. Although their family are closely to them, they will think their dad or their mom do not get through bad actions and do not have experiences for this. All of us know that young people are easily to go to wrong road in case they are not educated well. I believe that the prisoners are the best teachers for them.

In conclusion, it is truly to consider that people who have turned their lives around after being prisoners can help to deter teenagers from commiting crimes.