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Every evening I sit down on a soft cozy sofa and turn on TV as is my habit. I start surfing channels.
Usually I see the embelished commercials, excerpts from some movies, TV shows, news and lot of others. On one channel one are boast about the new shampoo, another channel gives fashion advice from another one hears philosophical opinions.
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The new shampoo is touted on one channel, fashion advices are given on next channel, from another one are heard philosophical speeches.
Television leads people and imposes their opinion to people. In my opinion, you shouldn’t believe everything that is shown on television. Everyone must decide for himself, to listen to television advice or not.
When we watch television we learn about the latest news and reviews of many famous people about the issues that we care about. Of course, all this things forms our consciousness and personality, it affects all of us. We watch much-touted programs, films, series, and then, meeting with friends and acquaintances, discussing them. If your friends are passionate about something, then will tighten you too.
Fashion covers the whole world, and this applies not only fashion industry, and literally to everything: entertainment, etiquette, a way of life, even to the actions. And a huge role in the spread of this mode is TV.
We are often depend from opinion others. When television touts how and what to do every day. Television impress us what is good and what is bad, we gradually begin to follow these guidelines. And we soon start to believe that it becomes our own thoughts
For example, to be a vegetarian becomes fashionable today. Where does it come from? I think it came from the Hollywood stars who talk about the secrets of beauty in their programs. Since we are beginning to follow their example. Certanly healthy living - it is wonderful. But we meet not only it on our screens.