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Syamil Adzman Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please check my essay
Hi!
I would like to ask if anyone can check my essay. I am Malaysian and just finishing my SPM examinatoin last year. Now, i am applying for scholarship at shell's scholarship program.This is the title~
"how your choice of study relates to your aspirations, career objectives and long term goals".
I am intends to pursue my study in Geology course. Since form one, I was really interested in geologist career, thus I always score in Geography till I got A for this subject in PMR. Also, I could do well in Mathematics, Physics and Chemistry. By that, I study a lesson that all of the materials in earth are beneficial to us and need to be care of.
I realize that the climate changes much as it getting worse due to natural and human being. Therefore, as a concerned citizen, I am keen to learn about our earth and the natural disaster likes earthquake and floods that occur frequently today. After finishing my study in this career, I will try to find the resolution on these problems, so that we can live in harmony. That is my career’s objective.
About my long-term goals, I wish to open my company that lead the industrial and commercial services for instances oil, gas and mining. My company soon will offer a lot of projects and programs to be conducted. By that, I can make sure that Malaysia always produce continuous and safe sources, thus increase the economic level.
I would like to ask if anyone can check my essay. I am Malaysian and just finishing my SPM examinatoin last year. Now, i am applying for scholarship at shell's scholarship program.This is the title~
"how your choice of study relates to your aspirations, career objectives and long term goals".
I am intends to pursue my study in Geology course. Since form one, I was really interested in geologist career, thus I always score in Geography till I got A for this subject in PMR. Also, I could do well in Mathematics, Physics and Chemistry. By that, I study a lesson that all of the materials in earth are beneficial to us and need to be care of.
I realize that the climate changes much as it getting worse due to natural and human being. Therefore, as a concerned citizen, I am keen to learn about our earth and the natural disaster likes earthquake and floods that occur frequently today. After finishing my study in this career, I will try to find the resolution on these problems, so that we can live in harmony. That is my career’s objective.
About my long-term goals, I wish to open my company that lead the industrial and commercial services for instances oil, gas and mining. My company soon will offer a lot of projects and programs to be conducted. By that, I can make sure that Malaysia always produce continuous and safe sources, thus increase the economic level.
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