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Her name is Wan Latifah bt Wan Hussein.The most beautiful woman i ever known.She got all the criteria as a perfect woman. She has the beauty,inner and outside.She has a work that very suits her, she has a man that she loves the most and mostly she has the children who loves her more than anyone else except my mother.
My mother came from a poor family, she grows up in a broken family, her parents divorced and her sister and she lived with their mother. She got her first education at English School and she was one of the best student there. When she was in final year of studying, she had fall in love with a man, her own teacher who is my father. It was love at the first sight. My father is amazed by her beautyness.
She has a very perfect oval shape faces and it looks perfect with her nose.She has not a very sharp pointed noise and not also round. Her nose is a very good one to the pure malay like her.She has a very small lips and a thin eyebrow. The most special things she has is her eyes.It is light brown same with the hottest bollywood stars eyes,Shah Rukh Khan.She has fair and clear smooth skins.She has a small size,not a very tall woman
My mother came from a poor family, she grows up in a broken family, her parents divorced and her sister and she lived with their mother. She got her first education at English School and she was one of the best student there. When she was in final year of studying, she had fall in love with a man, her own teacher who is my father. It was love at the first sight. My father is amazed by her beautyness.
She has a very perfect oval shape faces and it looks perfect with her nose.She has not a very sharp pointed noise and not also round. Her nose is a very good one to the pure malay like her.She has a very small lips and a thin eyebrow. The most special things she has is her eyes.It is light brown same with the hottest bollywood stars eyes,Shah Rukh Khan.She has fair and clear smooth skins.She has a small size,not a very tall woman
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Some notes: Is bt correct? The first period should be a comma Capitalize the pronoun I she has all the criteria of inner and outer work is a non-count noun very cannot modify verbs She grew up one of the best student s the final year she fell in love love at first sight beautyness is not a word Malay is capitalized very small lips and thin eyebrows They are light brown Bollywood is capitalized Skin is uncountable
- Some notes: Is bt correct?
- The first period should be a comma Capitalize the pronoun I she has all the criteria of inner and outer work is a non-count noun very cannot modify verbs She grew up one of the best student s the final year she fell in love love at first sight beautyness is not a word Malay is capitalized very small lips and thin eyebrows They are light brown Bollywood is capitalized Skin is uncountable
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Some notes:
Is bt correct?
The first period should be a comma
Capitalize the pronoun I
she has all the criteria of
inner and outer
work is a non-count noun
very cannot modify verbs
She grew up
one of the best students
the final year
sh
Is bt correct?
The first period should be a comma
Capitalize the pronoun I
she has all the criteria of
inner and outer
work is a non-count noun
very cannot modify verbs
She grew up
one of the best students
the final year
sh
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I think you have one more mistake
The most beautiful woman I have ever known.
She has/has got all...
Regards,
Tammy
The most beautiful woman I have ever known.
She has/has got all...
Regards,
Tammy
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her name is Wan Latifah bt wan Hussein .She is one of the most beautiful woman that I've ever met.She has all the criteria of the perfect woman.She is beautiful, inner and outside.she has a job that she is love .She has a man who almost loves her every time and she has the children who love her more than anyone else except my mother
My mother came from a poor family. She grew up in a broken f
My mother came from a poor family. She grew up in a broken f
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