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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Please check my english writing?
Hi, I am thinking a new commercial sentence for our new catalogue.
since I am not native english speaker, so I need your help. Is this sentences look weird to you?
"Is your voice not able to be understood because the voice is too small, the distance is too far or it is too crowded? ABC(product name) transfers your vivid voice including other party."
(well in the last sentence, "other party" means the man you are talking to.)
Please let me know if there is weird expression, or grammar. Thank you.
***and our product is wireless headset(kinda of tour guide headset), when each person wear the headset, these people can communicate each other. "the distance" meant the distance between each person. please refer to this..
since I am not native english speaker, so I need your help. Is this sentences look weird to you?
"Is your voice not able to be understood because the voice is too small, the distance is too far or it is too crowded? ABC(product name) transfers your vivid voice including other party."
(well in the last sentence, "other party" means the man you are talking to.)
Please let me know if there is weird expression, or grammar. Thank you.
***and our product is wireless headset(kinda of tour guide headset), when each person wear the headset, these people can communicate each other. "the distance" meant the distance between each person. please refer to this..
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Are you unable to be understood because your voice i s too low, the distance is too far , or the place is too crowded? ABC, our wireless headset, transmits your voice clearly to the other party.
- Are you unable to be understood because your voice i s too low, the distance is too far , or the place is too crowded?
- ABC, our wireless headset, transmits your voice clearly to the other party.
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Are you unable to be understood because your voice is too low, the distance is too far, or the place is too crowded? ABC, our wireless headset, transmits your voice clearly to the other party.
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