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Idontknowenglish Posted 12 years ago
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Please check my english grammar.
It would be bit difficult to define love as it pervades everywhere. It is a bridge between two humans to share, help and thrive in there life to last happily ever.
It is a human nature etched in genes to get attractive to opposite gender. It is not just that it is kind of affection between animal or man or woman to be happy. It can be mother and fathers love a son or a daughter, somebody’s love to their pet or most attractive, most romantic love between two opposite genders.
In entire history of human life the most attractive, horrific, valued and discussed is a love between men and women. It may be started to just to satisfy their sexual desire, power or for the prestige among peers, or it may be to help each to be happy. In old days there were restrictions for love between men and women because of cultural barrier and wealth. Now days societies have become more liberal and friendly that people don’t get afraid of there religion, caste and wealth to fall in love.
Young generations of these days more courageous, bold to be in love and they can do anything and everything to be together. Parents have to understand that wealth does not give happiness all the time and let youth decide their lives and to be with someone they loved.
It is a human nature etched in genes to get attractive to opposite gender. It is not just that it is kind of affection between animal or man or woman to be happy. It can be mother and fathers love a son or a daughter, somebody’s love to their pet or most attractive, most romantic love between two opposite genders.
In entire history of human life the most attractive, horrific, valued and discussed is a love between men and women. It may be started to just to satisfy their sexual desire, power or for the prestige among peers, or it may be to help each to be happy. In old days there were restrictions for love between men and women because of cultural barrier and wealth. Now days societies have become more liberal and friendly that people don’t get afraid of there religion, caste and wealth to fall in love.
Young generations of these days more courageous, bold to be in love and they can do anything and everything to be together. Parents have to understand that wealth does not give happiness all the time and let youth decide their lives and to be with someone they loved.
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It would be bit difficult to define love as it pervades ( pervade is intransitive. It needs an object. ) everywhere.
- It would be bit difficult to define love as it pervades ( pervade is intransitive.
- It needs an object.
- ) everywhere.
- It is a bridge between two humans to share, help and thrive in there life to last happily ever.
- It is a human nature etched in genes to get attractive the to opposite gender.
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It would be bit difficult to define love as it pervades (pervade is intransitive. It needs an object. You can say "love is pervasive.) everywhere. It is a bridge between two humans to share, help and thrive in there life to last happily ever.
It is a human nature etched in genes to
It is a human nature etched in genes to
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Thank your feedback and time you took out of your day for me I understood some of the corrections but I don't know what to replace with for some the corrections as followed below1. "to be happy" in "It is not just that it is a kind of affection between animal or man or woman to be happy"2. It can be mother and fathers love (love for or loving) a son or a daughter3."Young generations of these da
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1. I read the sentence a few more times. I can't make sense of it. Are any of these what you were trying to say?
I assume you were talking about happiness.
Happiness is not just a kind of affection between an animal and a man or woman. (Between means two things, A and B.)
Happiness is more than affection.
One needs more than affection to be happy.
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I assume you were talking about happiness.
Happiness is not just a kind of affection between an animal and a man or woman. (Between means two things, A and B.)
Happiness is more than affection.
One needs more than affection to be happy.
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