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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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please check my English

Hi. Could you please check my English below?
It is an introduction of a lecture.

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Introduction of how today's Japanese people relate to sports, with a focus on "doing" and "watching".

How people exercise and do sports, population registered in sports organizations, how people watch sports, gym and sports club membership rate, etc.

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By "sports club" I want to mean amateur sport circles.
  

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Anonymous It is an introduction of a lecture. I don't understand. A lecture is spoken in sentences, as a monologue, but your writing is just two noun phrases.

— Mister Micawber

  • Anonymous It is an introduction of a lecture.
  • I don't understand.
  • A lecture is spoken in sentences, as a monologue, but your writing is just two noun phrases.
  • How are you going to use these phrases?
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AnonymousIt is an introduction of a lecture.
I don't understand. A lecture is spoken in sentences, as a monologue, but your writing is just two noun phrases. How are you going to use these phrases?
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It is an introduction (summary) of a lecture to be printed on the program leaflet.

There is a list of lectures and brief introduction of each of them.

Hope you can help me.
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Then I suggest:

Introduction to how Japanese relate to sports today, with a focus on "doing" and "watching": who exercises and participates in sports, who watches sports, who joins gyms, sports club and other sport organizations, etc.
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