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01i00I would like to apply for several training programs, can you help me please to check it?02i02br
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01i00There are several text' sections:02i02br
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001) I am particularly interested in political issues, trade and economic cooperation because I studied international economic affairs at the University and I have already practical experience dealing with European Affairs.02br
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00But I am ready to take a new challenge to focus on other issues because I have thirst for knowledge. 02br
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002) My Bachelor paper was “Russia’s Foreign Direct Investment in XXXXX” that presented the overview of the activities of Russian investors in XXXX. The bachelor paper consisted of three parts. The first section explained the theoretical part of the essence of investments from economical, financial and country position. The second section of the bachelor paper included the overall assessment of the investment climate in XXXXX and the analysis of the aspects that had an impact on the flow of foreign direct investment in XXXXX. Further actions regarding the enhancement of the investment climate in XXXX were proposed, based on the research results. Actions also includes possible solutions to increase the interest of Russian investors to invest in XXXXX.02br
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003) Main duties are linked to the post-accession activities of XXXX to the European Union. The most important aspect of my job is successful representation of XXXXXXX’s interests in the EU. I am directly involved in the coordination of the EU affaires within the field of responsibility of the XXXXX (examination of the EU documents, elaboration of the national positions of XXXXXXXX on the topics discussed in the XXXXXXXX Council).02br
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00Since June 2005 I focus my attention to preparation procedure of introduction of the euro in XXXX (elaboration of strategy and master plan, coordination work of working groups).02br
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00Very often I am involved in organisation of meetings with EU institutions officials and other authorities regarding the discussions on Monetary and Finance issues. 02br
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004) As I have already mentioned in my covering letter that during academic year 2003/2004 I had the opportunity to study inter-universities program “European Union Affairs” organized by the XXX. I gained in-depth understanding of the guiding principles of the EU organization. It will facilitate the understanding of the work of XXXX in the third country. Also it means that I can understand and assess major current European and global trends, as well as specific issue areas. 02br
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00It is very important that I have very good command of English, French and Russian, which is particularly essential in operating in the Delegations in Russia, Ukraine, Bulgaria, Romania, Serbia & Montenegro, Croatia, Moldova, Kazakhstan etc. 02br
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00Participation in the XXXX will give me a general idea of the objectives and problems encountered in the work of XXXX. But I will offer new solutions to main problems. My knowledge and practical skills will be significant for facilitation of and support for the smooth and successful work of the XXXXX. Overall that will contribute to the work of XXXXXX.02br
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00My participation in this Programme will be of great advantage for my personal development and I will obtain the worthwhile experience for my future because I see my career by operating in the institutions of the European Union. 02br
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00I am confident that my strong motivation, my personality, my experience – it is solid foundation for successful representation of the interests of the European Union in the third countries.02br
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00But the most important is that my participation in the XXXXXX will help to achieve common goals of the XXXXXXXXXX that will strengthen future ties between third countries and European Union countries.02br
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005) Participation in the XXXXXX will give me a general idea of the objectives and problems encountered in the work of the XXXXXXXX. After participation I will offer new solutions to main problems in my country. Overall that will contribute to the work of the XXXXXXX. My participation in this XXXXXXXx will be of great advantage for my personal development and I will obtain the worthwhile experience for my future because I see my career by operating in the EU institutions.02br
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00As I am directly involved in the coordination of the EU affaires within the field of responsibility of the XXXXX(examination of the EU documents, elaboration of the national positions of XXX on the topics discussed in the XXXXX) this XXXX is my first choice. I feel the necessity to learn more about operating and decision making procedure in the EU. The established contacts through my participation in the XXXXXX will be of great advantage. Particularly I would like to find out how all new initiatives of the EU commence and how the member states can influence it at the very beginning.02br
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00Participation in the XXXXXX will give me a general idea of the objectives and problems encountered in the work of the XXXXXXXXX. It will be an opportunity to find out how the interests of the European Union are presented in the third countries and what are the main "secrets" of promoting EU policy there because the issue regarding the relations between XXXXXX and EU is very sensitive for XXXXX. XXXXX has to learn to do it in an effective and efficient way.02br
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01i00It would be very greatful if you could check it please.....02i0-