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Mitsuo23 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Please check my email signature
Hi,
I'm trying to create an email signature that I'll use for my agencies. Will you check if it looks good? I mean, grammatically, is it making sense?
Kind Regards,
My Name
___________________________________
Located in Japan (GMT+9)
On Messenger From 4:00 pm (EST)
The points that I'm trying to make by this signature are two thing. One is, I am located in Japan. And the other is, I will be on the MSN messenger (by which they contact me first if there's an assignment) from 4:00 pm (EST: their local time) everyday so we can communicate then.
Thank you in advance,
M
I'm trying to create an email signature that I'll use for my agencies. Will you check if it looks good? I mean, grammatically, is it making sense?
FROM HERE
Kind Regards,
My Name
___________________________________
Located in Japan (GMT+9)
On Messenger From 4:00 pm (EST)
TO HERE
The points that I'm trying to make by this signature are two thing. One is, I am located in Japan. And the other is, I will be on the MSN messenger (by which they contact me first if there's an assignment) from 4:00 pm (EST: their local time) everyday so we can communicate then.
Thank you in advance,
M
Top answer
Hi, If you sent this to me, I wouldn't grasp your meaning. But you know your business contacts better than I do. Have you considered using more words?
- Hi, If you sent this to me, I wouldn't grasp your meaning.
- But you know your business contacts better than I do.
- Have you considered using more words?
- eg saying more explicitly I can be contacted via MSN Messenger from 4:00 pm (EST) to 11:00 pm (EST) Clive
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Hi,
If you sent this to me, I wouldn't grasp your meaning. But you know your business contacts better than I do.
Have you considered using more words? eg saying more explicitly
I can be contacted via MSN Messenger from 4:00 pm (EST)
If you sent this to me, I wouldn't grasp your meaning. But you know your business contacts better than I do.
Have you considered using more words? eg saying more explicitly
I can be contacted via MSN Messenger from 4:00 pm (EST)
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(sorry it's hard too read, somehow line breaks wouldn't work properly)
umm,
maybe (UTC +9) was confusing and unnecessary.
I can be contacted via MSN Messenger from 4:00 pm (EST)
Could you make this a bit shorter?
Or
What do you think of this?
_____________________________________
Located in Japan
umm,
maybe (UTC +9) was confusing and unnecessary.
I can be contacted via MSN Messenger from 4:00 pm (EST)
Could you make this a bit shorter?
Or
What do you think of this?
_____________________________________
Located in Japan
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Hi,
Located in Japan
Business Hours 4:00 pm to 1:00pm (EST) Do you mean 1:00 am?
The point I would like to make is (actually I would like to remind them is) I will be available on MSN messenger for this one hour, 4:00 pm to 5:00 pm. (when their business hour
Located in Japan
Business Hours 4:00 pm to 1:00pm (EST) Do you mean 1:00 am?
The point I would like to make is (actually I would like to remind them is) I will be available on MSN messenger for this one hour, 4:00 pm to 5:00 pm. (when their business hour
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Thank you for the reply,
Yes, it actually is 1:00 am, but doesn't have to be mentioned, since they should contact me from 4:00 to about 5 or 6:00 pm.
And I don't necessarily have to mention MSN messenger. We both already know that's the easiest way to communicate. But I do have to make it clear when I will be available.
What do you think of this?
__
Loc
Yes, it actually is 1:00 am, but doesn't have to be mentioned, since they should contact me from 4:00 to about 5 or 6:00 pm.
And I don't necessarily have to mention MSN messenger. We both already know that's the easiest way to communicate. But I do have to make it clear when I will be available.
What do you think of this?
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Loc
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