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Samerrustom Posted 10 years ago
Vocabulary

Please check my email before i send it

Can I say " As per our phone conversation yesterday evening, I would like to remind to install new SSD into PC-02 because the mentioned PC is very slow"?
  

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Perhaps: As per our phone conversation yesterday evening, I would like to remind you to install a new SSD into PC-02, because that PC is very slow.

  • Perhaps: As per our phone conversation yesterday evening, I would like to remind you to install a new SSD into PC-02, because that PC is very slow.
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Perhaps: As per our phone conversation yesterday evening, I would like to remind you to install a new SSD into PC-02, because that PC is very slow.
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Thank your for your help, but I can't send it if you are not sure my friend because this email will be send to the IT manager
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I'm confident that my sentence is fine. Your original sentence has a couple of mistakes in it. I used perhaps to indicate that my version was a suggestion, but not the only possible way to phrase it.

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