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Ger-mes Posted 16 years ago
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Please check my CV
Dear fellows,
Would you please check and correct my CV?
I am applying to a business school so this CV is not for finding a job.
Very appreciate in advance.
Maxim Chernov
Moscow, Russia
Tel: +7 915 ***
maxim***@***.com
· Strategic planning and direction of sales of automatic gantry car washes and equipment for industry, forming price policy
· Direct sales, comprehensive support to dealer’s sales
· Bringing new clients and keeping up relationship with existing ones
· Providing trainings in industrial products for the dealers
· Organization and participation in target exhibitions
Achievements
· Involved investors and started up a new sector in car wash business in Russia - self-service car wash centers, with 1 site opened in Nizhniy Novgorod, 2 sites under construction in St. Petersburg and 2 sites under construction in Volgograd
· Achieved 11% increase in turnover of industrial products in Russia last year
· Successfully realized an extensive 8-month project with Mercedes Benz RUS. It was included: initial negotiations of delivery several automatic and manual car washes with water recycling system, discussing and signing contract, designing and implementing technical solutions and supervising installation.
· Set up distinct and clear system of cooperation among the headquarters in Germany, Kärcher Russia and vast chain of local regional dealers, regarding industrial range of equipment
· Service, maintenance and installation of automatic gantry car wash systems and water recycling systems
· Fault finding and further repair
· Technical support for customers on site
· Monitoring availability of spare parts and making relevant orders
· Making reports weekly
Achievements
· Achieved 25% decrease in warranty claims by timely and professional approach in servicing key accounts
· Successfully managed to cover car wash sites of East London and Kent County with service and maintenance
· Fault finding and repair of domestic and professional equipment (mainly floor-cleaners, sweepers and high-pressure jet units) within a filed of mechanics, electronics, electrics, hydraulics, pneumatics
· Installation and start of new equipment on site
· Participated in exhibitions providing technical support
Achievements
· Progressed from domestic to professional equipment.
· Was solely in charge of the equipment in several big companies, providing full technical and service support for them
Specialist in Engineering, 2001 - 2006
Automation of technological processes and productions in manufacturing
Volgograd State Technical University, Volgograd, Russia
Personal details
- Hard-working, initiative, communicative, purposeful
- Love theater. Do amateur acting.
References
- Stanislav ****, Head of Sales Dep., Kärcher Russia, +7 495 **
- Oleg ****, General Director, Kärcher Russia, +7 495 **
- John ****, Head of Service Dep., Kärcher UK, +44 **
Would you please check and correct my CV?
I am applying to a business school so this CV is not for finding a job.
Very appreciate in advance.
Maxim Chernov
Moscow, Russia
Tel: +7 915 ***
maxim***@***.com
Work experience
Kärcher, Moscow, 02/2009 – present
Product manager
Responsibilities· Strategic planning and direction of sales of automatic gantry car washes and equipment for industry, forming price policy
· Direct sales, comprehensive support to dealer’s sales
· Bringing new clients and keeping up relationship with existing ones
· Providing trainings in industrial products for the dealers
· Organization and participation in target exhibitions
Achievements
· Involved investors and started up a new sector in car wash business in Russia - self-service car wash centers, with 1 site opened in Nizhniy Novgorod, 2 sites under construction in St. Petersburg and 2 sites under construction in Volgograd
· Achieved 11% increase in turnover of industrial products in Russia last year
· Successfully realized an extensive 8-month project with Mercedes Benz RUS. It was included: initial negotiations of delivery several automatic and manual car washes with water recycling system, discussing and signing contract, designing and implementing technical solutions and supervising installation.
· Set up distinct and clear system of cooperation among the headquarters in Germany, Kärcher Russia and vast chain of local regional dealers, regarding industrial range of equipment
Kärcher, London, UK, 03/2008 – 02/2009
Field Service Engineer
Responsibilities· Service, maintenance and installation of automatic gantry car wash systems and water recycling systems
· Fault finding and further repair
· Technical support for customers on site
· Monitoring availability of spare parts and making relevant orders
· Making reports weekly
Achievements
· Achieved 25% decrease in warranty claims by timely and professional approach in servicing key accounts
· Successfully managed to cover car wash sites of East London and Kent County with service and maintenance
Kärcher, Moscow, 02/2007 – 03/2008
Field Service Engineer
Responsibilities· Fault finding and repair of domestic and professional equipment (mainly floor-cleaners, sweepers and high-pressure jet units) within a filed of mechanics, electronics, electrics, hydraulics, pneumatics
· Installation and start of new equipment on site
· Participated in exhibitions providing technical support
Achievements
· Progressed from domestic to professional equipment.
· Was solely in charge of the equipment in several big companies, providing full technical and service support for them
Education
Specialist in Engineering, 2001 - 2006
Automation of technological processes and productions in manufacturing
Volgograd State Technical University, Volgograd, Russia
Personal details
- Hard-working, initiative, communicative, purposeful
- Love theater. Do amateur acting.
References
- Stanislav ****, Head of Sales Dep., Kärcher Russia, +7 495 **
- Oleg ****, General Director, Kärcher Russia, +7 495 **
- John ****, Head of Service Dep., Kärcher UK, +44 **
Top answer
Hi. I went over it completely and made correction as they were needed. You did a good job on it, though.
- Hi.
- I went over it completely and made correction as they were needed.
- You did a good job on it, though.
- " was confusing to me.
- Maybe you just typed it wrong.
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Hi. I went over it completely and made correction as they were needed. You did a good job on it, though. The part that starts with
"Successfully realized..." was confusing to me. Maybe you just typed it wrong.
Good luck with thim.
Kärcher, Moscow, 02/2009 - present
Product Manager
RESPONSIBILITIES
· Strategic planning and direction of
"Successfully realized..." was confusing to me. Maybe you just typed it wrong.
Good luck with thim.
Kärcher, Moscow, 02/2009 - present
Product Manager
RESPONSIBILITIES
· Strategic planning and direction of
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Hi Englishmaven. Thank you very much for a quick reply.
There also some questions:
1. Any difference between "Providing training on" and "Providing training in"?
2. "Involved investors and began a new sector in the car wash business in Russia - self-service car wash centers, with 1 site opening in Nizhniy Novgorod..."
Does it mean that the site is opened already or not? The m
There also some questions:
1. Any difference between "Providing training on" and "Providing training in"?
2. "Involved investors and began a new sector in the car wash business in Russia - self-service car wash centers, with 1 site opening in Nizhniy Novgorod..."
Does it mean that the site is opened already or not? The m
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