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Xakep2 Posted 18 years ago
Business & Finance

Please check my cover letter, Seeking employment in as IT pro in investment industry

XXX INVESTMENTS L.P.
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Sincerely,
  

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P. address Dear sir or madam, I understand that *** INVESTMENTS hires computer programmers who are interested in implementation and support of software used in investment and risk management. I learned about the *** INVESTMENTS while browsing Dr.

— Feebs11

  • P.
  • address Dear sir or madam, I understand that *** INVESTMENTS hires computer programmers who are interested in implementation and support of software used in investment and risk management.
  • I learned about the *** INVESTMENTS while browsing Dr.
  • D's web-site.
  • I am very interested in a computer programmer position with *** INVESTMENTS, and believe that my skills and work experience are making me a competitive candidate for such position.
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xakep2Manager, Personnel Department,
*** INVESTMENTS L.P.
address

Dear sir or madam,

I understand that *** INVESTMENTS hires computer programmers who are interested in implementation and support of software used in investment and risk management. I learned about the *** INVESTMENTS while browsing Dr. D's web-site. I am very interest
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thanks Feebs11.

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