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Littlebunny124 Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

Please check my cover letter!

Hi, can anyone please check my cover letter for grammar??? Any suggestion or comments??? Thank you very much....


To Whom It May Concern:

I was excited to read about the Office Specialist/Reservations job opening at Craigslist website, as my skills and qualifications match your requirement for this position. It would be wonderful to work for your company, and I am eager to implement my experience and contribute to your organization.

As my enclosed resume indicates, I graduated with a Bachelor of Arts in Behavioral Science from the Metropolitan State College of Denver. While attending school full time and working part time on and off campus, I have demonstrated a solid work ethic and developed excellent time-management skills.

My experience working at my previous jobs convey that I am capable of working independently with minimal supervision as well as in a fast-paced environment. My previous employers will attest that I am dependable, hard-working, optimistic, dedicated employee who is willing to learn and gain experience necessary to be successful.
With these skills, I am confident I am a perfect match for this position. I will appreciate the opportunity to meet and further discuss my qualifications with you and this position. I look forward to hearing from you to arrange an interview. If you wish, I will have my letters of references send to you. I can be reach at xxxxxxx or by email at xxxxxxxx.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,

P.S. One more question. If I am writing about my work experience, should I write it in past tense or present tense??? Thanks again!!!
  

Top answer

Hi, I'm sorry, but I only have time for one comment. Never start such a letter with To Whom It May Concern. Do your best to find out the person's name.

  • Hi, I'm sorry, but I only have time for one comment.
  • Never start such a letter with To Whom It May Concern.
  • Do your best to find out the person's name.
  • eg Is there an office you can call, to ask who is in charge of hiring?
  • If you can't do that, then start with Dear Sir or Madam.
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Hi,

I'm sorry, but I only have time for one comment.

Never start such a letter with To Whom It May Concern.

Do your best to find out the person's name. eg Is there an office you can call, to ask who is in charge of hiring?

If you can't do that, then start with Dear Sir or Madam.

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