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Topic: Some say that it is good for children to stay away from their families and go to boarding school. Others say that children had better live with their families and attend a day school. Discuss.

People's opinions differ as to whether give children to boarding school or allow them to take part in day schools. While there are some strong arguments for providing youngsters with education away from parents, I still believe that it is better for pupils to choose a day school.

There are several reasons why some people might argue that boarding school is the best choice to help pupils develop. To begin with, boarding school creates and strengthens relationship between children and their friends as well as pupils and teachers. More specifically, thanks to boarding school, pupils will have more time to contact with their friends and their teachers, which helps them raise awarenesses of one another. Moreover, boarding school assists children in developing their independence. To clarify that, when a child has to live without his/her parents' assistance, he/she will have to do everything by himself/herself, which gives them more experience and being more self-disciplined.

Despite the aforementioned factors, I am convinced that parents should give their children to day school instead of boarding school. The first reason is that it brings financial benefits to many families that could not afford the boarding school's fees so that it would be better choice for them to give their children to a day school due to its cheaper fees. What's more, parents can see their children everyday and help them to develop if their kids learn at a day school. It is obvious that youngsters will have more opportunities to participate in extracurricular activities when they choose a day school, which will make their parents more effortless to help them develop their physical and mental health.

In conclusion, I am still for the opinion that a day school is a better choice for the children and their parents as it assists them to save more money and develop more effectively than boarding school.